Post by Mist On Fire on Dec 4, 2006 0:07:28 GMT -5
Hey!!
Earlier tonight Hawkbell and myself did an RP in an IM window.It turned out great and we HAVE to share it with all of you.She did a fantastic job on it with her three parts to my one and it was a great excercise for both of us to practice on.What we did was RP the end of the FMA movie from the AMESTRIS side of the Gate which we never get to see in the film.I played Mustang and she played Al,Havoc,and Riza.I apologise for the punctuation,I basically edited the chat as best I could to keep the flow.
We began at the scene where Ed is leaving on the ship and Al doesn't want him to go.(I did Ed's line)
Here's what transpired..... ;D
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==AL : "Brother!! Brother you can't leave!! I just got to see you again!! Brother!!!"
==Ed: "You go close that gate Al,and thank Winry for me" *goes inside the ship*
==AL: "No!!! Brother!! Come back!! Don't do this!!!" *tries to break free from General Mustang*
==Mustang: "Wait Al,it's too dangerous.you can't help him now.We have to close the gate"
==AL: "Let me go with him!!! I want to stay with him!! Brother!! Wait!!"
==Mustang: *sighs*- knowing he can't keep them apart,he relents-
==Mustang: "Okay Al,go! JUMP! I'll take care of the Gate from here"
==AL: -Al jumps across the gap and turns back to General Mustang- "Say goodbye to Winry for me!! And thank you!!"*disappears inside the ship*
==Mustang: Mustang waves goodbye to Al and knows he would help him after all.As the ship departs,Mustang looks down and sees he has a problem... how to get back down
==HAVOC: "COLONEL!!!!!"-Havoc is in another balloon waving to Mustang-
==Mustang -<thinks to self> NOW you come and get me! Great!
==HAVOC: "I'm sorry sir, I would've gotten here sooner, but it took awhile to find material for a balloon and something to run it"
==Mustang:"Never mind that,hold still"
-Mustang snaps at the air behind Havoc's balloon and it draws in close enough to jump-
==HAVOC: -Havoc falls to the floor at the sudden jerk of the balloon- " Maybe a warning next time?"
Mist On Fire : ( XD )
==Mustang: "How does it look on the ground?Where's the portal?"
==HAVOC: "It seems to be underground, sir. I believe Lieutenant Hawkeye may know more."
==Mustang: -Mustang snaps again and the balloon heads downward to touch ground.He sees Riza waiting for him-
==Riza: -Lieutenant Hawkeye runs to the balloon as it touches ground, fuming.-
==Riza:" You liar!! Only room for one!!!"
==Mustang: "Only room for one to go UP.Where's the portal? We need to get to it NOW"
==Riza:"It doesn't make a difference, up or down!!! What if I needed to protect you!!"
==Mustang: "It was an EMERGENCY!"
Mist On Fire : (XD)
hawkbell91 : (XD)
Mist On Fire : (ooh I like this)
==Riza: "ALL THE MORE REASON TO TAKE ME WITH YOU!!!"
Mist On Fire : meanwhile Amestris is falling apart all around them while they argue
hawkbell91 : (LMAO!!!)
==Mustang: "Fine! I'll take you with me NOW! Let's go!"
==Mustang: "HAVOC!!"
==HAVOC:" Yes sir?"
==Mustang:"Find the General and tell him to meet us at the Gate"
==Mustang: "Go!"
==HAVOC: "Sir!" *salutes and runs off*
==Riza: "I saw Ed come from over here!!" Riza yelled, running off.
==Mustang: "Lead the way,I'm right behind you" -follows riza-
==Riza: -Riza ran down the street, gun in hand, firing at randow suits of armor as they appeared.- "Here!!" -She jumped down into a large hole torn in the road.- "It must be down here!!!"
==Mustang: -Mustang follows and spots the transmutation circle Al made.Just as they reached the bottom,Ed's ship vanishes through it
==Riza: -Riza stared wide-eyed at the Transmutation circle-. "It's so elaborate!" *jumps back* "There they go..."
==Mustang: "I made a promise to close this,we have to do it now!"
==Riza: -Riza unconciously touched her back as she stared at the circle- "How sir?"
==Mustang:"Watch,I don't do this very often" -Mustang took a piece of chalk out of his pocket and ran to the edge of the circle-
==Riza: "Sir?" She said, her voice shakey, unusual for the firey Lieutenant.
==Mustang: -using the chalk,Mustang altered a few lines to reverse the pattern.Kneeling down he touches the circle-
==Riza: -Riza stared in amazement at Roy's advanced knowledge of alchemy.She goes to kneel beside him-
==Mustang: -The array lit up in an eerie red glow as the energy around them swirled inwards through the Gate-
==Riza: "So bright..." -Riza put her hand to her forehead to block the light-
==Mustang: -the light slowly faded to reveal the scarred ground of Al's circle,the ground caved in near the center- "It's done"
==Riza: -Riza gaped at him- "All that and not a scratch on you!!!"
==Mustang: -he drew in a deep breath and said nothing.He reached for her hand-
==Riza: "Sir?" She asked, -blushing-.
==Mustang: "You DID protect me....every step of the way.Just knowing you were here gave me strength I was missing for so long"
==Riza: "Sir, I- " Riza began, -not knowing where she was going with this-
Mist On Fire : (got ya stumped yet? hehe)
hawkbell91 : (no kidding...feel free to jump in...wasn't expectin that!)
Mist On Fire : (LMAO)
==Riza: "I- I'm glad I was able to- I just- I-I-"
==Mustang: -Mustang turned and looked into her eyes and simply smiled.He stood up and pulled her up with him"Let's get out of here"
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Sadly,that was as far as we got.Hawkbell had to make a quick exit right here.Shame we didn't finish that.
Earlier tonight Hawkbell and myself did an RP in an IM window.It turned out great and we HAVE to share it with all of you.She did a fantastic job on it with her three parts to my one and it was a great excercise for both of us to practice on.What we did was RP the end of the FMA movie from the AMESTRIS side of the Gate which we never get to see in the film.I played Mustang and she played Al,Havoc,and Riza.I apologise for the punctuation,I basically edited the chat as best I could to keep the flow.
We began at the scene where Ed is leaving on the ship and Al doesn't want him to go.(I did Ed's line)
Here's what transpired..... ;D
-----------------------------------------------------
==AL : "Brother!! Brother you can't leave!! I just got to see you again!! Brother!!!"
==Ed: "You go close that gate Al,and thank Winry for me" *goes inside the ship*
==AL: "No!!! Brother!! Come back!! Don't do this!!!" *tries to break free from General Mustang*
==Mustang: "Wait Al,it's too dangerous.you can't help him now.We have to close the gate"
==AL: "Let me go with him!!! I want to stay with him!! Brother!! Wait!!"
==Mustang: *sighs*- knowing he can't keep them apart,he relents-
==Mustang: "Okay Al,go! JUMP! I'll take care of the Gate from here"
==AL: -Al jumps across the gap and turns back to General Mustang- "Say goodbye to Winry for me!! And thank you!!"*disappears inside the ship*
==Mustang: Mustang waves goodbye to Al and knows he would help him after all.As the ship departs,Mustang looks down and sees he has a problem... how to get back down
==HAVOC: "COLONEL!!!!!"-Havoc is in another balloon waving to Mustang-
==Mustang -<thinks to self> NOW you come and get me! Great!
==HAVOC: "I'm sorry sir, I would've gotten here sooner, but it took awhile to find material for a balloon and something to run it"
==Mustang:"Never mind that,hold still"
-Mustang snaps at the air behind Havoc's balloon and it draws in close enough to jump-
==HAVOC: -Havoc falls to the floor at the sudden jerk of the balloon- " Maybe a warning next time?"
Mist On Fire : ( XD )
==Mustang: "How does it look on the ground?Where's the portal?"
==HAVOC: "It seems to be underground, sir. I believe Lieutenant Hawkeye may know more."
==Mustang: -Mustang snaps again and the balloon heads downward to touch ground.He sees Riza waiting for him-
==Riza: -Lieutenant Hawkeye runs to the balloon as it touches ground, fuming.-
==Riza:" You liar!! Only room for one!!!"
==Mustang: "Only room for one to go UP.Where's the portal? We need to get to it NOW"
==Riza:"It doesn't make a difference, up or down!!! What if I needed to protect you!!"
==Mustang: "It was an EMERGENCY!"
Mist On Fire : (XD)
hawkbell91 : (XD)
Mist On Fire : (ooh I like this)
==Riza: "ALL THE MORE REASON TO TAKE ME WITH YOU!!!"
Mist On Fire : meanwhile Amestris is falling apart all around them while they argue
hawkbell91 : (LMAO!!!)
==Mustang: "Fine! I'll take you with me NOW! Let's go!"
==Mustang: "HAVOC!!"
==HAVOC:" Yes sir?"
==Mustang:"Find the General and tell him to meet us at the Gate"
==Mustang: "Go!"
==HAVOC: "Sir!" *salutes and runs off*
==Riza: "I saw Ed come from over here!!" Riza yelled, running off.
==Mustang: "Lead the way,I'm right behind you" -follows riza-
==Riza: -Riza ran down the street, gun in hand, firing at randow suits of armor as they appeared.- "Here!!" -She jumped down into a large hole torn in the road.- "It must be down here!!!"
==Mustang: -Mustang follows and spots the transmutation circle Al made.Just as they reached the bottom,Ed's ship vanishes through it
==Riza: -Riza stared wide-eyed at the Transmutation circle-. "It's so elaborate!" *jumps back* "There they go..."
==Mustang: "I made a promise to close this,we have to do it now!"
==Riza: -Riza unconciously touched her back as she stared at the circle- "How sir?"
==Mustang:"Watch,I don't do this very often" -Mustang took a piece of chalk out of his pocket and ran to the edge of the circle-
==Riza: "Sir?" She said, her voice shakey, unusual for the firey Lieutenant.
==Mustang: -using the chalk,Mustang altered a few lines to reverse the pattern.Kneeling down he touches the circle-
==Riza: -Riza stared in amazement at Roy's advanced knowledge of alchemy.She goes to kneel beside him-
==Mustang: -The array lit up in an eerie red glow as the energy around them swirled inwards through the Gate-
==Riza: "So bright..." -Riza put her hand to her forehead to block the light-
==Mustang: -the light slowly faded to reveal the scarred ground of Al's circle,the ground caved in near the center- "It's done"
==Riza: -Riza gaped at him- "All that and not a scratch on you!!!"
==Mustang: -he drew in a deep breath and said nothing.He reached for her hand-
==Riza: "Sir?" She asked, -blushing-.
==Mustang: "You DID protect me....every step of the way.Just knowing you were here gave me strength I was missing for so long"
==Riza: "Sir, I- " Riza began, -not knowing where she was going with this-
Mist On Fire : (got ya stumped yet? hehe)
hawkbell91 : (no kidding...feel free to jump in...wasn't expectin that!)
Mist On Fire : (LMAO)
==Riza: "I- I'm glad I was able to- I just- I-I-"
==Mustang: -Mustang turned and looked into her eyes and simply smiled.He stood up and pulled her up with him"Let's get out of here"
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Sadly,that was as far as we got.Hawkbell had to make a quick exit right here.Shame we didn't finish that.
A happy ending!
